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Haha this is amazing!

SierraMadreNightmare responds:

Thanks Danny. It's old. I still come back to listen to it from time to time. Sadly, this is the only remains of this. I have since reformatted and lost most of this Newgrounds content.

Why is it that everybody has to put cheesy synths in there -_- damn! I Thought this was gonna be proper techno

Hellstick responds:

Im sorry to hear you didnt like the synth. I put it in there to because i didnt think the piano was fit for a climax. Oh wellz, thanks for the review friend:)

Quite hard; nearly unnecessarily so. Soften it up a bit, make it easier on the ears. The kick felt like it was trying to knock my teeth out rather than giving me a good time listening to music. Might want to quieten the snare down too. Other than that it sounds like a good track!

If u fancy a collab gimme a shout!

Peace, and keep up the good work!

Bobeo responds:

Well, I was trying to kinda make a more aggressive track with some oldschool elements as well. But I can see where you are coming from. The mastering on this one could use a bit of work.
And sure, I would be up for a colab...I haven't done one before but...first time for everything.

Not 100% sure what you were trying to achieve here... but it's missing some decent bass and it's too irregular. Build it up too. You went straight in there! Give it time to get together. Add some regularity in there and it could sound decent.

seems... rushed?

Anyway, decent work - keep it up!

BinaryGuy responds:

i changed a couple things. delete browser cache and refresh page to hear it!

What is this? Theres nothing special, you need to sort out a synth line that's funky and keep some regular beats if you want it to be some good decent house.

Start with a kick, find a soft one and play it. While this is playing come up with a bassline. Doesn't have to be complicated might only change note twice. Have the bassline deep and one that makes you feel sick in your stomach one that really tingles your balls! 4 beats is all you need. Then work on your synth, dont put too many in there or it sounds cheesy, 3 maybe 4 at the most don't place them in a regular arrangement. One thing this track is definitely missing is hats, it needs some open & closed. Im not saying this is shit; im simple offering criticism :)

If you want to collab & learn a few things gimme a shout

Peace

zcult responds:

I appreciate your point of view because it's so contrary to mine. Very true about the drums needing improvement. We should definitely try to collaborate to learn something.

Well put together; any chance of the material to make my own edit? (Or atleast just the synth lines?)

I get what you mean on the 'working on something' too long thing too. Usually i just leave something alone for a while and come back to it when i've regained inspiration!

But yea, you're very close to getting yourself on a winner here!

Keep up the good work!

buyj3llo responds:

Thanks dude. I'm not 100% sure what you're asking in the first question. If you're asking if I used your material in this song, the answer is no. If you're asking if I would like to use a synth line from you, the answer is yes. I'm always looking for stuff to sample. PM me, i'm down for anything.

Not too bad; any chance of the material to work on my own edit?

I like the overall track it's pretty cool! Although that high-pitched triangle thing kills my boner :/

Other than that; keep up the good work! This is excellent! It has a lot of emotion in the chords that is so rarely found on newgrounds!

BuggMusic responds:

Is it a massive coincidence that you're following me on SoundCloud?? Anyway, I can give you the samples I used but they're ripped straight from the track, I just EQ'd them. No acapellas or anything like that, sorry if that's what you were hoping for. Also sorry for your boner, people often complain about high pitched synths in my tracks, I never seem to learn... Thanks for the review!

Hmmmm

could do with a bit more polish... try to work on that beat better. Maybe sidechain that synth a bit more

Pulsar013 responds:

A side chained synth does sounds attractive - I 'll probably upgrade this song later - thanks for the advice :)

Wth?

straaaange... although this is not techno

SpitNeck responds:

What else could it be ? Also, who the heck cares ? I dont care if you find the song strange, tell me If its good or not.

Good track... but

It's a good track, but it needs to flow better, you need to compress that bass because it's drowning everything out and work on that saw sound because it's too raw.

I dont wanna sound like a dick :P im just trying to help you make it sound better :D

Other than that... good job! (Y) Keep it up!

H4llucin8 responds:

Yeah i've been trying to figure out how to do that. how would I on FL studio 9?

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