Haha this is amazing!
Thanks Danny. It's old. I still come back to listen to it from time to time. Sadly, this is the only remains of this. I have since reformatted and lost most of this Newgrounds content.
Why is it that everybody has to put cheesy synths in there -_- damn! I Thought this was gonna be proper techno
Im sorry to hear you didnt like the synth. I put it in there to because i didnt think the piano was fit for a climax. Oh wellz, thanks for the review friend:)
Fucking fantastic! Coming from somebody who doesn't even like this sorta stuff... well done!
Quite hard; nearly unnecessarily so. Soften it up a bit, make it easier on the ears. The kick felt like it was trying to knock my teeth out rather than giving me a good time listening to music. Might want to quieten the snare down too. Other than that it sounds like a good track!
If u fancy a collab gimme a shout!
Peace, and keep up the good work!
Well, I was trying to kinda make a more aggressive track with some oldschool elements as well. But I can see where you are coming from. The mastering on this one could use a bit of work.
And sure, I would be up for a colab...I haven't done one before but...first time for everything.
Not 100% sure what you were trying to achieve here... but it's missing some decent bass and it's too irregular. Build it up too. You went straight in there! Give it time to get together. Add some regularity in there and it could sound decent.
Anyway, decent work - keep it up!
i changed a couple things. delete browser cache and refresh page to hear it!
Not bad at all, but it seems like you brought things in too soon, 30 seconds in and im already chatting up a bassline shes like a desperate woman she ran in too soon...build it up. Tease your audience then give em something funky to listen to :) i really liked this! Just get a longer build up ;) The chords were fucking sick man! If you fancy a collab gimme a shout!
Excellent work though; keep it up!
What is this? Theres nothing special, you need to sort out a synth line that's funky and keep some regular beats if you want it to be some good decent house.
Start with a kick, find a soft one and play it. While this is playing come up with a bassline. Doesn't have to be complicated might only change note twice. Have the bassline deep and one that makes you feel sick in your stomach one that really tingles your balls! 4 beats is all you need. Then work on your synth, dont put too many in there or it sounds cheesy, 3 maybe 4 at the most don't place them in a regular arrangement. One thing this track is definitely missing is hats, it needs some open & closed. Im not saying this is shit; im simple offering criticism :)
If you want to collab & learn a few things gimme a shout
I appreciate your point of view because it's so contrary to mine. Very true about the drums needing improvement. We should definitely try to collaborate to learn something.
It seems simple; and it works! Well done... im liking this 8)
Quite a lot of mid there... hurts the ears a bit. Needs a bit more bass!
MMmmm... hardly techno. It's more like acid/electro-house, very fast and punch in the face. If you slow it down to 125, put a softer kick in there and filter the line a bit more i reckon you'll have something funky!
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